Yumeiwaterhouse

Hey MisakiDevi, I really love you Fanfiction so far, and I like how you decided to do the opposite of the one that inspired you (I’ve read it too). I can’t wait to finish it! Also I’m sorry if this sounds mean but I have some feedback - it is to improve on the grammar, that’s all. I hope that it won’t put you down bc I won’t forgive myself otherwise! I’m sure that your grammar will get better overtime anyway. Overall REALLY good job on the book.

Stop your fanfic is so sad