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dont mind if i do read ye stuff ere, quite curious really
Yurizonoo_Seia
I need ideas for Nyx
Help ):
Yurizonoo_Seia
@Nyx_Null problem is that i destroyed Trinity, and everyone is broken. Koharus gone terror. Mika is not mentally sane right now, Gehenna is gone. In ashes.
Namza_Akarsa
@Nyx_Null everything is start from zero again?? so like there's accident that makes this story is feels like it going from the beginning?
Yurizonoo_Seia
Top #4 in blue archive. Oh god I'm cooked
Yurizonoo_Seia
Oi, what should I do for Nyx Chapter 14
Yurizonoo_Seia
I have a question, I require some good. Criticism, is the elements good so far...?
ShirokoFan
@Nyx_Null mmm i havent actually read through it, but listening to your voice messages makes me think that nexus keeps crashing out. you shouldnt make a chracter crash out like 10 times or something that would be over using it. it makes the reader lose sympathy for the chracter. which makes them lose interest within the story due to boredom. but take this with a grain of salt since i havent given it a read yet.