Hi sofii
I came across The Daughter of Pluto and ended up staying longer than I expected. There is something very quiet but powerful in the way you wrote her. The line about being “small enough to be underestimated, dangerous enough that no one makes that mistake twice” really stayed with me. It says so much about her without trying too hard.
I also liked the part where you wrote about Camp Jupiter teaching her to choose wrong when people are bleeding in front of her and how she never does. That felt real. It made her feel like someone carrying more than just power, but also weight.
The world and emotions are strong, and the tension between loyalty and doing what feels right is something that pulls the reader in. At the same time, it feels like a story that more people should be finding, but somehow it is still sitting quietly where only a few can see it.
I just wanted to say I really appreciated the story and the feeling it leaves behind.
I was also curious, do you have any of your work published on Amazon or Goodreads?
If you are ever open to a quick conversation, I would be glad to talk.
You can reach out to me here
emeliaason@gmail.com
