TwistedApology

Hello, I hope you enjoyed my story The Elahim Brothers,please do share and vote! Xoxo

YusraNomanSheikh

@TwistedApology @TwistedApology I went through The Elahim Brother a while ago and it had surely been an epic read , such that it made me go through final chapters twice. I was hooked to the air of Dar ul Maqamah ,how Falaz Naaz became Falak Naaz and not just Falak ,how greatly her sorrows of the past subsided there. The bonded web of the five brothers of mountains with their backs straight and accents peculiar . I loved Al Widan and Al Wais , Al Hassan and the beautifully imperfect amongst all Al Souffiyan. How inticrately you made powder blue cups a part of all the happenings . 
            'Silk skin ,silk skin ', hooked me to the softness of Al Souffiyan . How he said that he married Falak Naaz and was not made to marry her. How 1,2,3 ... days he locked himself because of his past demons. He had alot on his sleeves but he proved to be sweetheart. Ar Afaq was Afaq of Falak and Souffiyan ❤❤❤❤ 
            This story has an emotional edge ,a connectivity but the poor guy deserved to see his child, he really did . Only if you could have done that... 
            I love this story,xoxo but my heart goes to the guy who thought he will kill himself and he got rid of his life without seeing his first born.
            Much love 
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