@YuzuSugarLemon
Lemon Sugar is now YuzuSugarLemons. I tried searching for my account and found someone else's account who also had the name Lemon Sugar and I didn't want anyone to get confuzzled. I don't think they saw my account but I dont want anyone to confuse mine for theirs. They had the name first and I dont want to feel like I stole the name.
Hi so I just read the new lemon. Big improvement! I definitely see potential. Also, update. Our contractor’s computer has a virus. From now on post all of your commissions to Wattpad or just DM them to me and I’ll give you your cut when I can but our in between person might make things difficult. I’ll edit the one you have now lightly and give both you and our contractor a copy so that we can develop relations and I can give you my notes. Big improvement from last time! Just a couple of the common errors to smooth out. I’ll see you at lunch on Thursday?
Okay, update. I've decided that it would be better for both of us if I just give you my notes and I'll see if you can make your own revisions to a presentable (sellable) standard this time. About 70% of my ability is required to not be suspicious.
