Merxoxo25
I really like your book would you mind giving me feedback on my first chapter https://www.wattpad.com/story/401566614?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Merxoxo25
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@Merxoxo25 Hi! Thanks for sharing your story with me—I read through your first chapter of Midnight and Saltwater. I really like the atmosphere you’re building; it has a very moody and mysterious vibe that fits the title well. The opening line (“The tide doesn’t choose between the sun and the moon…”) is very poetic and immediately grabbed my attention.The imagery is strong and gives a clear picture of the setting.You’ve set up some intriguing hints about conflict and choices to come.