ZGamer2008

Also, Please Don't Mind The Intro Before The Story, As That Was Made In Early 2023.

ZGamer2008

So, Uh, I Finally Made A Story, Or At Least One That's Actually Done With The Writing Stage. It's Name: "Sonic Forces: Infinite's Return". I Actually Tried To Finish The First Chapter Of The Story, So I Hope It's Good Enough. I'm Not Even Close To Actually Finish With The Whole Story, But I'm Getting Started For Now. What I'm Planning To Do Is To Finish The Second Chapter (Which Is A Backstory) Around 2 Weeks Later Or Less By The Time I'm Sending This. 
          
          I'm Still New To Writing My Stories On Wattpad, So You Might See Some Inconsistencies in the Story, Such As Delayed Screentime For Characters, Short Stories (Around 300-400 Words Compared To The Minimum 1,000 - 10,000), And Repeating Sentences, As Well As A Bit Of SonAmy In There (Even Though I Didn't Mention The Ship Entirely, More Like A Mutual Relationship As Friends) In The Backstory, So It Might Be Bad, But I Did Try And Be A Bit Descriptive When Writing, As I Done Many Times Before.
          
          I'm Currently Still Writing It, But It Might Be Finished Before 2026, If I Don't Procrastinate Often.
          
          Anyway, Please Read The First Chapter, As I Need Some "Improvement" Suggestions + I Really Need Some Opinions Here And There. 
          
          Pls, Help Me :(

no-eyed-girl

bro what are you doing! theres an HD remake of fer swerdz! read that instead!!!!

ZGamer2008

@no-eyed-girl Why?! But I Understand. LOL
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no-eyed-girl

it's better to, especially if i'm already making a rewrite and i get very embarassed by old works. i also hold a bad grudge if it's the only ones people pay attention to.
            
            and no, i'm not doing that.
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ZGamer2008

Also Please Check My Reading list on my page please 
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