This is what i think about the novel. It has potential, i like how you use those catchy ideas and put it into those types of moments. Like how hyunwoo wasn't tall enough to reach that book and sookjon came to the rescue and when hyunwoo got bullied and sookjon came to the rescue again. Like i said, it has potential. The downside is that the grammar is making me read it like a tongue twister, but if you fix it it'll be great! Overall, 9/10. I enjoyed it hehe ^^