Zach42799

Hey guys. Chapter 22 is at 2000 words. Obviously I'm going slow, and its entirely because I'm off doing everything other than working on the story. Mostly trying to figure out where to take the story. I've noticed how bloated it is and if I don't do something, it's only going to get worse. I'm thinking since I'm introducing some of the DC villains that I'll do more of a villain of the week approach between the main chapters (Regarding the main plot). At least that way I can have something engaging rather than have three or four chapters that only serve to set up the next plot point. I'd really like to hear feedback about the idea, especially since I'm not even sure my idea is even good.

Zach42799

Hey guys. Chapter 22 is at 2000 words. Obviously I'm going slow, and its entirely because I'm off doing everything other than working on the story. Mostly trying to figure out where to take the story. I've noticed how bloated it is and if I don't do something, it's only going to get worse. I'm thinking since I'm introducing some of the DC villains that I'll do more of a villain of the week approach between the main chapters (Regarding the main plot). At least that way I can have something engaging rather than have three or four chapters that only serve to set up the next plot point. I'd really like to hear feedback about the idea, especially since I'm not even sure my idea is even good.

Zach42799

Its about time. Chapter 21 is finally ready. Its 3500 words and took much longer than it really should've. Those three or four days I spent with strep really cut into writing time. Oh well. It will be out tomorrow at 8AM, as per usual.

Zach42799

@Zach42799 I'm planning on taking a actually break come the new year, but that's not before I get a double upload in. I definitely want to do it this year since I couldn't the last. 
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EpicWolfMiles

@Zach42799 take a break man, we can't have you keeling over due to health decline
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Zach42799

So a quick update, I'm at 3000 words and counting. I'm doing my best to make it a longer chapter. It will also have a poll at the end so keep an eye out for that. I don't know when it will be done since I'm working slow, but it really shouldn't be too much longer.

Zach42799

Alright guys, I'm feeling much better. Still got a sore throat but it doesn't feel like I'm dying anymore, so I'm gonna start putting in some real work on the chapter. While I was sick, i got 500 words. Not much but its a start.

Zach42799

Chapter 20 is ready to go. It fell about 400 words short of my 4000 goal, but I figure its close enough. It'll be up in the morning. 8AM as usual. In other news, I've got strep so that's been fun. I'm taking a little time off to try and get over it. Don't get sick often, but when I do, its miserable.

Zach42799

Seeing as I've done barely any work on Chapter 19 in the last few days, I decided to just release it as is and pick back up straight into Chapter 20. Hopefully I can keep myself focused instead of goofing off with the next chapter.

Zach42799

So update time. Chapter 19 is at 1500 words and counting. I've been putting more of Wilted Rose on AO3 and I've admittedly been goofing off instead of working. That being said, I think I'm going to start the game reviews back up now that I've played Trepang2. I've got a lot I want to say about it.