Zain_2007

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Aahu_belle

Sorry for the late response. I couldn't contact you because of some circumstances, and I see that you are improving slowly, slowly. Keep the good work, going on. Just two concerns, one capitalization  when you put dialougues and most paragraphs are bit too long, that which you can improve on, otherwise it is good and good vocabulary. 
          -Aahu_belle

Zain_2007

@Aahu_belle thanks alot 
            I am trying to improve my book performance and all.
            Can you rate my storyline and character plus the pacing different chapters
            Also was the twists good
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ZchStories

It's good book, I just found out that book was tag as romance.. but that's fine and also kind a powerful first chapter. Can you read my story the title is There's Nothing Wrong in Ohio

Zain_2007

@ZchStories I just finished second chapter of the story
            I am including romance that's why added tag as love
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Aahu_belle

@ZchStories If you are talking to me then, I have read the first chapter and it is quite suspenseful yet good.
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Zain_2007

@ZchStories sure
            Can u give me review on my book
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Aahu_belle

Hello, Can you message me when you upload the story, so I can review it??
          -Chandra

Zain_2007

@Aahu_chandra I updated the story with an Intro plus check b tell
            Also my snap is z41_op
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Aahu_belle

Which country are you from??
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Aahu_belle

@Zainpro37 I actually don't have Instagram, that's why I asked
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