Hey, Zaiya,
I wanted to start off by saying I’m sorry for your loss. I understand the loss of a grandparents that you are very close to.
I want you to know that your book is really good, one of the better Radioapple stories I’ve read on here.
However, I could help but get the feeling that I had read chapter 10 before. In fact it seemed very familiar even though I was reading it in your book for the first time. I realized it was altered from the book Desire posted by another Radioapple story. I just wanted to let you know I see no problem with using other’s work to inspire your own, but maybe since it was basically copy pasted with some slight altering, maybe you could give the original creator a shout out or tag. I think it would be a nice way of thanking them for their inspiration.
You don’t have to respond to this message if you don’t want to, you can even delete it if you want. I just understand that it’s not cool having you work be displayed as someone’s own without getting a little credit.
I hope you continue to write and hope to see more work from you in the future, you’re very good. Have a nice day and keep creating