Zalenciaaa

Do yall like third person pov more than first person? I feel like for reading I don’t mind either as long as the story is good.

lilypondulooop

I personally don’t care whether or not it’s in first person or third person as long as the writing is good then we Gucci
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That_one_Sasuke_simp

I like first person best as it allows you to truly feel the character if you're reading. You know what they think, feel, want etc. And I'm a fan of how you switch povs at specific moments. 
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gamix318

I think alterning POV is the Best when used correctly. Like when naruto stopped answering sasuke, using sasuke pov was just perfect
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Zalenciaaa

Do yall like third person pov more than first person? I feel like for reading I don’t mind either as long as the story is good.

lilypondulooop

I personally don’t care whether or not it’s in first person or third person as long as the writing is good then we Gucci
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That_one_Sasuke_simp

I like first person best as it allows you to truly feel the character if you're reading. You know what they think, feel, want etc. And I'm a fan of how you switch povs at specific moments. 
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gamix318

I think alterning POV is the Best when used correctly. Like when naruto stopped answering sasuke, using sasuke pov was just perfect
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Zalenciaaa

ang mensaheng ito ay maaaring nakaksakit
Do we forgive Naruto for being an asshole in the beginning or no… Yall comments got me worried HAHA… trust he didn’t mean to be but he was trying to “protect Sasuke” by making him hate him. Plan failed successfully.

Lesley142

I would forgive honestly 
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emmmatirnoa

honestly yeah like i kind of understand why he did it but obviously that’s not an excuse to be rude asf 
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Zalenciaaa

Lord they’re so dramatic XDDDDD LMAOOOO 

Zalenciaaa

@Lesley142 yaaaay I finished the meat of the scene just gotta add the extras and I’ll be good to post tomorrow if not the day after 
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Zalenciaaa

So many ideas and not enough time

Zalenciaaa

@world4466 I think my problem is also that I don’t know how to end a story so I drag it on too
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Zalenciaaa

@world4466 that’s a great idea honestly. I should try that.
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world4466

I don’t mean to be rude but I think it would be easier for you to do long one shot stories so you don’t feel pressured to upload chapters and have a certain schedule,  but if you want to add on to the ones shot you can .
            
            I think you have a lot of prompt and ideas but you can’t write about them because you don’t want to put out more unfinished stories.
            With the long stories I feel your expectations are  high for writing which put more pressure on you then causes you to have writer’s block. That’s why I think it would be easier for you to write really long one shot or short stories so don’t feel pressured, just a suggestion and take care of yourself ☺️
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Zalenciaaa

May have cracked the code. We’ll see with this proof read.

That_one_Sasuke_simp

@ Zalenciaaa  Don't worry, take your time XD
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Zalenciaaa

@That_one_Sasuke_simp I’m working hard over here man HAHA
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Zalenciaaa

ang mensaheng ito ay maaaring nakaksakit
I HAVE REWRITTEN THIS FUCK ASS SM CHAPTER  THREE FUCKING TIMES AND IT’S ABOUT TO BE FUCKING FOUR GOD HELP ME AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Zalenciaaa

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@gamix318 it just don’t sound right to me idk. It’s not slow enough, I feel like the dialogue is weird, I’m just not fucking with it at alllllll
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gamix318

What part are you struggling the most ?
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emmmatirnoa

zalen you always have peak writing do not stress 
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