Yesinia__

Oh hey, long time no talk.

Zamein666

@Yesinia__ giving it your full attention means it will come out even better.
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Yesinia__

yeah i plan to only focus solely on one thing at a time. sometimes i may so something else but I'm gonna only focus on one story at a time
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Zamein666

@Yesinia__ writer block can come in many forms. It's good to hear that you over came it and  returned with a focused ambition, never lose that which moved you to write in the first place. I know my writing isn't that great but at least I try to improve it un someway everyday. When I first started this story I wrote in down in a note book. Now I look back at that from time to time and think, WOW, I wrote this like a 4 year old wrote it using finger painting about a story when they found a burnt Lego piece in the sand box at school.
            
            I make me smile to know that where I am now, it could always be worse. Much, much worse.
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Zamein666

@new_mani you are more than welcome sounds great that you want to take your original story futher. I saw an incredible potential for it to be more and it is great that you noticed that too. I follow now so once it post I will definitely like to go over it since I've read the original and would be reading the polished copy. 
          
          And narrative, that's the word I should have used.

Zamein666

@new_mani it is good to hear/read from you. I see you have abandonded your original story that I first read. However, you found a new set of stories and poetry to express yourself. Good for you. I have bounced here and there with this app and figured I needed to become more focused with it and I came across your coversation with me a while back. I can see that your work has taken an abstract approach to painting a picture. None the less still original. You always have a way to express emotion like a high caliber, however, like a high caliber bullet it runs too fast at some points leaving the reader with a feeling of (how did we get here?)  Now I'm not saying your work is bad, far from it. Just that if you want to express an emotion try lingering on it to really get the reader to understand what you are conveying. Fill in the blanks of why a character is angry, sad, or happy. You have what your characters peronas nailed,; now tell it to the world. 
          
          P.S. thank you for the add and just the same if you have anything for me I would be so humble to get your opinion.