Somnussenior

I'm expecting the next chapter, but don't rush it, please.
          I prefer to wait months if it's something of quality, like your first chapters. 
          My only requirement is knowing if the book is abandoned or not.
          Thank you.

Zancro_iz_lazy

@Somnussenior what do you mean what about his "crush"?
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Somnussenior

@Zancro_iz_lazy, the last one, a nice fight, tension, and world development, who attacked him? Why? Who watched him? It sounds like a gang, maybe something about his father? How did he die? (I might have forgotten this one), and what's the plan of revenge? Oh, and what has been doing the ex-girlfriend until now? I'm intrigued :). A very good question: What about his "crush"? 
            Of course, answer this in your next chapters, as you have been doing until now,  the mystery and what would happen in the future.
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Zancro_iz_lazy

@Somnussenior I see, thanks for the follow by the way, also what chapter was your favorite? I'd like to know if there's anything I can use to enhance the following chapters.
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