@Zancro_iz_lazy
I hope this story doesn't drop out ..
Its really fantastic .
The chapter 11 was way too great .
A lot of charcters appeard ,
And the action aginst two main antagonists has been on the purpose .
Every charcter you make is a unique individual to the story . Man its so addicting . So Attached to the memory .
A great story , i hope it continues till the end .
You got me addicted to your story…
@Fixed20 is that so? I'm happy to know people are enjoying it. I'll try to push out a chapter within the next two days
I'm expecting the next chapter, but don't rush it, please.
I prefer to wait months if it's something of quality, like your first chapters.
My only requirement is knowing if the book is abandoned or not.
Thank you.
@Zancro_iz_lazy, the last one, a nice fight, tension, and world development, who attacked him? Why? Who watched him? It sounds like a gang, maybe something about his father? How did he die? (I might have forgotten this one), and what's the plan of revenge? Oh, and what has been doing the ex-girlfriend until now? I'm intrigued :). A very good question: What about his "crush"? Of course, answer this in your next chapters, as you have been doing until now, the mystery and what would happen in the future.
@Somnussenior I see, thanks for the follow by the way, also what chapter was your favorite? I'd like to know if there's anything I can use to enhance the following chapters.
Thanks a lot for your comments, I need that type of shit.