ZaneBrooks

Hi, guys.
          	
          	I am sorry that I haven't been back after a while. Yep, very much after a while, no?
          	
          	I also am very sorry that I am deleting "Our Strange Meeting" and "Cerise Pendants." I am targeting to publish this by the time I graduate high school, so I can't very well publish it online. This can lead to copyright infringement of my stories before I can even publish them - by the time I have done so, maybe one has already seen my ideas and decided to write them and sell.
          	
          	I will be, however, still writing plenty of other "less serious" stories. :| Hopefully, this will make up for it. Wish I can just - argh. Thank you for all your support, my small count of fans. Just check back once in a while. Thanks.
          	
          	ZaneBrooks.

ZaneBrooks

Hi, guys.
          
          I am sorry that I haven't been back after a while. Yep, very much after a while, no?
          
          I also am very sorry that I am deleting "Our Strange Meeting" and "Cerise Pendants." I am targeting to publish this by the time I graduate high school, so I can't very well publish it online. This can lead to copyright infringement of my stories before I can even publish them - by the time I have done so, maybe one has already seen my ideas and decided to write them and sell.
          
          I will be, however, still writing plenty of other "less serious" stories. :| Hopefully, this will make up for it. Wish I can just - argh. Thank you for all your support, my small count of fans. Just check back once in a while. Thanks.
          
          ZaneBrooks.

ZaneBrooks

Hi, darlings, sorry for not posting up any chapters lately, but school started last Tuesday, so I was forced to go to school. Yeahh....forced. :P
          
          CHECK IT OUT. I'm in FanFiction.net too. xD Under the name "Elizabeth Monique". Yes, I know, I fail at making pen-names. Ehh, live and learn - at least I have some talent in making up titles. LOL.
          
          So. Go check those out, except for "Proposal". Ugh. I hate that cliche - I was planning to rewrite it, so until then, don't read that fan fic!
          
          ZaneBrooks. :P

ZaneBrooks

My laptop's charger is broken — yet again for the third time — so I cannot access the chapters for “Our Strange Meeting” and “Cerise Pendants.” I am so frustrated, as I have definitely gotten several good ideas in the past days and I could not work on them!
          
          So, how exactly am I writing this? Through my iPod touch, whose tiny keyboard is not up to the job of writing and typing up several thousand words for all the chapters I've been imagining up. :(
          
          See you all next time when I get my laptop fully charged,
          ZaneBrooks

WattyReview

Hello there. 
          
          We had a look at your work, and yes, like you suggested in your comment on our review page, it was quite an original piece of work. But however, we cannot help but feel that your story still sort of revolves around ‘an unpopular girl (even though she doesn’t go to school, she is homeless, giving her the element of being unpopular) somehow bumping into a gorgeous guy. 
          
          Now, in saying so, we are ever so relieved that she did not fall head over heels for him. We’ve seen a couple of ridiculous stories, where as soon as the girl sees the boy, she drools. 
          
          Now for some constructive feedback.
          
          - If you are going to continue this story (and we hope you do. :), try to avoid things like ‘the girl’s parent’s abused her and she ran away from home’, or any of that parental issues. Young author’s on this site are as about as creative as that. Full stop. As soon as there is an issue, they throw it towards the parents. It’s either the parents are abusive, or some other reason.
          
          - Introduce some twists into the story. Readers, (especially us) love to be surprised by the author – it’s what makes the story so good. It requires careful planning of the plot, mind you, but you’ll get there in time, and your work will be paid off. Some stories on this site make us want to claw our eyes out at the unoriginality of the plot. 
          
          We hope this has helped. :)
          
          Regards,
          WattyReview.

ZaneBrooks

Another chapter for "Our Strange Meeting?" Sorry, no. But here's something to make it up for you...hopefully. Another new story, somewhat same in tone with "Our Strange Meeting."
          
          BUT, I cannot guarantee it, so why don't you just head over to my profile by clicking my picture? And then click on that title "Cerise Pendants." :) Thank you for becoming a fan of mine, and for voting on my stories.