hiiiiii… um.. idk how to say this so um—
please don’t take offense by this! i’m just trying to help a fellow poet refine and improve in their journey of writing! i like your poems and i’d love to see them get better by the day!
i think you have some interesting ideas, but maybe there’s room for more clarity or structure in your writing. have you considered experimenting with different rhythms or word choices? i like your poetry— don’t get me wrong, and i’m not saying mine is good (it’s not) but there’s definitely room for improvement! you’re a good writer, and you have lots of potential, i can tell you’re really passionate about your poetry, and that’s such an important part of writing!
also you made a grammar mistake in the title of your book
“poetry that shatters your soul and pierces it like a arrow”
put the word ‘an’ before arrow—
