No, no, no! This is actually one of the stories I like. I realize you're young and this may be your first work? but this is so far a fresh look compared to all the other werewolf books on Wattpad.
I am a published author and have just recently uploaded one of my books here (Pinehurst) so that I can reach new readers. I have been reading many books on Wattpad over the past few weeks, and yours is one I don't have complaints about! (other then I want the next chapter! ;)
I have met with many schools to discuss writing and how to create stories and embellish on scenes, so I do have knowledge that I hope will help you now with the question you posed: I'm not sure what "suggestions" you've received, but the only thing I noticed was that the last chapter was a bit rushed—that's all. It's important to slow down, lead the reader into each scene and paint the picture. Pretend you've made a movie and are explaining it to a blind person. Let us know what the characters see, smell, feel. I'm not implying you haven't done that, you've only just begun and I think you have a good start. But it is the best advise I can give to new writers so keep that in mind and don't rush; it only cheats the story. Also, take the suggestions that you find helpful and make your stories better. Not all advise will apply so it is up to you to sort out what you need and please not let others sway you. It's your story and you tell it how you see it. Just know that I am really enjoying it and am looking forward to the next chapters ;) which I hope you will be giving us soon??? I hope that helps? Nicole
