Zar_wrts

The epilogue of Yours to heal is published guys….do read it and also do read the new book yours to embrace❤️✨

Unkownbeeo

Hi author 
          I jusst completed your book yours to heal and it was absolutely one of my best reads
          The main thing i liked about this book that nothing was grabd about it but still it made my heart feel warm❤️
          It actually represented mordern day love nothing extreme
          Normal family normal relationship Normal friendship but still somehow all these things made my heart full ❤️
          I really enjoyed and and excited to read you next work to
          Keep growing ☺️❤️

Zar_wrts

Aww thankyou so much for this review❤️ I’m glad you liked my book
            Do try the first book in the series yours to lose…I’m sure you’ll like it
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Sowmaa1

Hello author, I started with the one shots Claws in my destiny and Until the morning finds us. Both were interesting and then I read Yours to lose and it's amazing. Didn't even think Arjun and Megha had a past and were separated due to miscommunication. Loving little Vrishti and want a baby brother for her too.

Zar_wrts

Aww thankyou so much for reading my books❤️
            I’m glad you loved them so much❤️
            Please try my another book from yours to series - yours to heal
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Zar_wrts

Hi Everyone 
          Thankyou so much for 50k on yours to lose
          I’m really happy that it has so many reads now, for me that’s a really big thing….
          So I want to request you all to please drop your reviews about it on the conversation board if you have read it❤️

WaveAndWildfire

Hlo author  I’m a regular reader of your story, 'Yours to heal,' and I really love your work.I’ve been a reader for a long time and have always thought about writing my own story. A few days ago, I was encouraged to finally start writing, and I’ve just posted my first story's 1st part .You can find my story here: 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/410952101?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Gauru1223
           you have a moment, please read it and let me know what you think. I would truly value an honest opinion from someone who doesn't know me personally and can give me genuine feedback. Thank you so much!" ❤️

WaveAndWildfire

Oh ok thank you so much 
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Zar_wrts

Hey Gauru
            I have checked your story and I really liked it❤️
            It’s such a good concept…the story has lot of potential…
            
            Although there are a few things I’d like to suggest… first one is not using emojis in the book….emojis are such a huge turn off specially when they are added in between…
            Second thing is that….you have to make the paragraphs shorter…. Longer paragraphs are not very pleasant to read, so add some breaks between them…and also use proper writing style…like somewhere the lines are underlined and somewhere they are written in bold when it was not necessary so do edit them.
            And all the best for your book, it’s okay to make grammatical errors but don’t use ai to correct them. You will face a lot of problems in future regarding that….i wish you more success❤️
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