Zari_Knowles

I’m over here like ‘wdym Ray is mellow???’ Y’all I made her like that because Tay’s there!!!! I’m like that too, I’m mean or chaotic whenever I’m out by myself, but with my siblings I gotta make sure they don’t get us in trouble so I get more ‘mellow.’

Cinders220

Okay so I don’t even know if you’ve ever read this story but it’s a beck Oliver love story and the oc was a plus size girl and she’s famous, I remember reading it but I can’t remember who the author was, I was just wondering if you have any clue about what I’m talking about and if you know the author

Cinders220

@180datgurl do you remember what the author’s username is
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180datgurl

@Cinders220 ik what your talking bout but i remember the author saying they was takin it down
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Cinders220

@SkylerLorraine me either or the author I had it wrote down and I don’t know where it’s gone
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tballard234

Wait so Quinn was friends with Ezra’s mom but Ezra got adopted by Charlie and Renee then got with Charlie?

Zari_Knowles

Yes bc at the time Quinn couldn’t take care of Ezra (she was also being targeted by the people that killed Ezra’s mom) and it was a coincidence that she got with Charlie seeing as she fell for him before knowing that he had adopted Ezra
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Zari_Knowles

I’m over here like ‘wdym Ray is mellow???’ Y’all I made her like that because Tay’s there!!!! I’m like that too, I’m mean or chaotic whenever I’m out by myself, but with my siblings I gotta make sure they don’t get us in trouble so I get more ‘mellow.’

Zari_Knowles

TEST RUN TO SEE IF WE LIKE THE REWRITE

yk2wavvy

I really like the old one, I like that we get to see her and Beck’s interaction more and how her personality is. I’m still stuck on the old names so it’s hard for me to change into the new ones cause I feel like the old names match the characters more. I like that we see Rays interacting with her family and Cat and how we can see that they love each other and have each others back. The new one is cool, I like that we saw more Tay and Jade, I feel it’s just a little out of place and Ray is a little more mellow than before. All together I like seeing Tay and Jade in the new one and Ray not liking Tori as much, if you could mix both old and new it would be really good but that is totally up to you. My vote is still on the Old one <3
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fanskilledtheworld28

I really really love the old version because of how Ray’s character was and the interactions we had between Beck and Ray, there were some parts that were a bit cringe but not too much and was still REALLY good. I like the in depth back stories of the new version and I’m a huge fan of Tay and Jade of course. I just wonder if there’s a way to kind of intertwine the two and come to a sort of median. Your writing is AMAZING and this is literally my favorite Beck/Victorious stories. I just feel like the new story is a little too “tame” is like the only word I can think of
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1-800-MrsHotchner

@Zari_Knowles i like both versions the old is good because we got to see Ray being a badass but i think the new one gives more background information on what went on in life also i like seeing the relationship between jade and tay in more depth. i also love that in this one ray doesn’t like tori and doesn’t give her as many chances as she gave in the previous version of the book
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