BillDurfy
Hi Zaria. I hope that you don't think I'm being harsh. I like the characters, (so far) but it was a bit confusing once the action kicked in.
BillDurfy
@BillDurfy sorry, i thought the point was to improve your writing. Criticism isn't really a bad thing, its taking something and trying to make it better. That's what editors and proofreaders do,, try to help you improve what you have written. I'm sorry you haven't received my comments in the spirit in which they were intended.
ZariaDew
@BillDurfy its a writing site, and almost all the writers on this site are amateurs. A lot of us would like to go without anyone criticizing and commenting mistakes we made, so if you could delete your comments and refrain from correcting me that would be great.
