_riarua

Hi there. Coming in from rebels. Is there a particular chapter you'd like critiqued? I wasn't sure where I should start because the beginning is marked [for revision].

Zarifall

@_riarua I have and I believe things are getting sorted! Thank you very much for bringing this to my attention! If you'd like to read this draft and criticize feel free just atm it's just a throw away draft I scribbled up in like 2 days. So it isn't really any show of the story or my writing ability which is why I wanted to have it left from the pull list until I can write a proper draft worthy of being viewed xd
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_riarua

@Zarifall Have you messaged them? It might not be too late.
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Zarifall

@_riarua oh well there is a bit of a misunderstand it seems cause I asked the Queens to leave my book out of the pulling until I've rewritten it into the final draft- ^^"""
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