Ya know. I just stumbled upon your grudge story. Kayako is a horrifying being for sure. And the origins for her can inspire great works. and I can give a little bit of advice, maybe even inspire you. I know the story is like 7 years old. But if you're still into the reading and writing part of your creative mind. You could improve your old works and even create new ideas. I think you have great potential for amazing works. You've just gotta learn the making a of a good story. I'd read Stephen King for horror. His works are terrifying and sometimes just downright unnerving. I'd also suggest Eragon and The Lord of the Rings books too. And possibly Thomas Harris, the writer for The Silence of the Lambs.
