Directioner and proud member of the TW Fanmily, please give me feedback on my story 'The Infection' :) I would love if I had some constructive criticism on it :D

'The Infection' as you have probably guessed this is part of a series, there will be at least 5 books in the series but you never know I may write more :)

Any comments I take into account if they are criticism and I don't easily get offended, if you think one of my stories is rubbish tell me but you have to give me a reason why so then I can improve.