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Zazaisme
Please forgive me if there is any error grammar. Give me vritic and suggestion I just published "1. Stranger" of my story "The General's Partner". https://www.wattpad.com/1267411420?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Zazaisme&wp_originator=lyUhyRJI8WFNuIDBhCFH%2FshOK0rkYPfvB3WZpevufBj4mPujOJjadzAy1AEHLoV8jdDJbNYNCMq7bxNLJBhjkjXuShdDzZn6L0EOBEEXG4Zn9HyVMA8%2Bw1rxAcWqdGJi