Zech1994

@zech1994 right I just copied and pasted some parts of my other Bio to save time I guess I must have forgotten to edit it 

@KingAccel Hey, I noticed in the Bio Jaune's Height is off. 165 cm is about 5'4 that around Ruby's height.

@KingAccel True

@KingAccel 
            
            4th post
            
            1) The immortality bit could be worked out later, but Jaune needing to give a maiden a Hickey would be embarrassing and hilarious, to be able to use an authority the first time and after thathe either has to satisfy the conditions you set, or suck a maidens blood to active that Zodiac.
            
            Though I have to ask, would Jaune still be fighting the Zodiacs and getting their powers after defeating them? Cause I imagined them being random encounters. Their relationship with Kalied Blood, would be like Lufas from the manga A Wild Last Boss, familial in nature. Them hating Jaune for killing her, which he himself felt conflicted about since she wanted to die, forcing him to defend himself. These would be the most painful for Jaune since he is very family oriented. Him having to fight Kalied Blood's grieving adopted children to the death, would leave him feeling vulnerable and very human. Him going to call his family just to hear their voice in a private place, then breaking down crying alone in the dark after finishing the call. This is because one of the battles against the zodiacs got to intense from what they said to him. 
            
            One of the concepts here is that Jaune being a family oriented person has him connect to the zodiac's memories of how they became a family with Kalied, when getting its full power. This would hit Jaune even harder after the fight, thus Jaune wanting to be close to friends and loved ones after such a thing happened. Thus showing that under his new exterior, Jaune isn't perfect he is still who he is. Jaune coming to grips with this and overcoming it, especially with a closer relationship with his loved ones.
            
            I would like to say that you could use the powers of the Zodiac from the Wild Last Boss manga, Strike the Blood, as well as Mondaiji. In Mondaiji, Izayoi had the Leo authority giving him protection since it's derived from the Nemean Lion myth.
            
            I would like to hear what you think, on my 3 inputs here. We may need another thread.

@KingAccel Lol this is longer than I thought:
            
            3. Pyrrha doesn't need to be a priestess, though it would show her more feminine side, instead of the warrior on the pedestal she stresses over. Though Pyrrha confronting Jaune, in private and him telling her that he can't tell her everything and being vague, could set in motion either of the scenarios I've mentioned. If you wish to make it so she finds out first, doing it your own way or like Asagi, go ahead. We can talk more later if you want, about what you want to do.
            
            1.  Since Vale has its first King, things would be very chaotic. Jaune having an easy time like Godou isn't very likely, especially since Vale was originally neutral ground that the other campione didn't really go to. So people and groups being in Vale to avoid a Campione would have been ideal, but now that is out the window. Jaune being a campione is so out of left field that anything and everything can happen. A panicking group or person leaving Vale could make a mistake causing an incident.  I read somewhere that Vale is the size of a Megalopilis that's like 1,800km. So breaking a college semester down into 15 weeks, Jaune having a easy nonmagical week would be rare. Add in that Vytal festival will be held as well so 3 to 5 small incidents per week would be light. Rudra Vs Surtr that I previously stated even if it's not the introduction for the magical world would still be awesome. Horus could be if Jaune gets a mission to Vacuo, while Nauda would be in Patch. But those two we can get back to later.
            
            As for the zodiac, I'm not a fan of how Godou's Warlord authority required conditions for activation. But if that's what you wish, go for it. Though could one of Jaune's power be vampirism to unlock a zodiac, requiring a maiden for the first activation only, and immortality like Berserker's Twleve labors. Paying a bit of homage to StB series. Only Jaune need to be killed 12 times with each death sealing a zodiac for 24 hours.
            
            Part 2 in next post.

@KingAccel 
            
            P2/2 for question 3.
            
            3. So, while ordinary people can't see grimm being in Jaune's close proximity could increase their spiritual awareness which would allow them to see the unexplainable and confront Jaune. 
            
              Remember that team Rwby is like right next door, and they have the same classes, and hang out together. Compared to all the other students, and as for why the other students don't suddenly awaken, well they all have aura and it requires accepting the unexplainable in their lives, surprisingly people accept the grimm despite science no being able to explain them, ie they think they have it figured out, believing what they want to believe. But the major point is that being in close proximity to Jaune during a magical incident is the trigger for awakening spirituality easily, with throughs staying in close proximity the longest having an easier time accepting their new reality, thus why other people who are near him at school aren't affected. Sort of like how in Bleach Ichigo is the catalyst for why Chad and Orihime got their powers.
            
            The second way to introduce them to everything, is when they are doing a mission that suddenly has two heretical gods coming to blows. Like, how Verethragna and Melqart fought. With the reason I gave before being the why they can see the Gods fight and comprehend it. Only in this case the magical incident is Surtr and Rudra battling it out is some region outside Vale. Their reasons vary, with Surtr wishing to fulfill his purpose of burning the Nine worlds to cinder, starting with Midgard (ie.Remnant). Rudra is a bit complex, he is an avatar of Shiva the Destroyer, coming out only when trying to restore the Dharma, which Surtr is disturbing. Consequently, a Campione's existence disturbs the Dharma, as well. Jaune convincing Rudra to let him face Surtr and Rudra honoring to face the victor between Surtr and Jaune a week after wouldn't be out of the question. Plus, a natural disaster would extend the mission a few days.

@KingAccel That it has, sure it won't be a problem. Though I think it would be better to start a new thread, because this one is kind of long at this point.

@Zech1994 been a while, I created a copy of the work with a few small changes and wanted to see what you think 
            
            https://docs.google.com/document/d/16Xj6tF6Lltx-lOCjfoF73cGJoT8pWx-YLkzBipFaQAk/edit

@zech1994 I just checked Hengen Musuo out planning on using that since some of Yukina's moves can be applied to it, especially point
            Granted at the start Jaune only knows the basics techniques and learns advanced applications through Rossweisse, Sayaka, and Yukina
            Granted I haven't figured out how
            Sayaka will pop back into Jaune's life.
            I know I want Yukina to make her first appearance in Beacon's dance
            I might just do the episode with Nalakuvera from Stike the Blood
            That is a good point with the Lion it's technically magic but remembering
            Coco's purse yeah...

@Zech1994 Yeah and was already notified about it, for some reason his account gets deleted for some stupid reason

@Zech1994 Nvm, he moved his account.

@DeathWolf06 So it seems Jaunedice deleted his stories again. Seriously, what is with the authors who have decent stories, with over 50 chapters deleting their accounts, while others who have lesser quality stories leave theirs up.