jojobrouwer
Hey zee. I think the email I sent you with the edited first chapter could be posted now. Do you?
Zeepicgamer
XD I finished. I'll email it to you now, to see if you like it. I made a couple other changed as well
jojobrouwer
Sorry, I was just being lazy.......I meant to do it! I just....forgot.....I'm forgetful.....
Zeepicgamer
@jojobrouwer Soon, but I have to finish fixing your grammar errors :P mainly just starting new paragraphs after speech