Zeeshankhan301

Soon 

Zeeshankhan301

Just wait till it blows your mind
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RaMyyyy_Dr

@Zeeshankhan301  OK i will Wait its very good histoty bro. You are the best
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RobertMartinez047

Honestly I’m not gonna lie this is my third time reading it cause this one is so amazing and honestly I can’t get enough of it I really hope you will update but I know there a lot going in your life so I’m willing to wait for another chapter and when you feel like life is hard always step back and look at the good memories and let the bad one be the past but thank you for making a amazing book I hope you make more chapters and I pray everything in your life goes smoothly for you 

Abh_NV

Bruh I really like your writing bruh!!! My story is lame in front of you Share some tips bruh...!! <3 <3

Abh_NV

@Zeeshankhan301 thanks ....datebasa...
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Zeeshankhan301

@Abhnav Bro that's not at all correct you are doin great just keep up your work.
            
            And as for tips I can only give you two and that's 
            
            1) try to make your story as realistic as you can.
            
            2) Use the potential of our favourite ship as much as you can because you see there is no ship as dynamic as borusara. 
            
            His sensei being the father of his love interest and her idol being naruto and How much they both are perfect for each other with their flaws.
            
            As for your writing it will improve with the chapters as did mine.
            
            So there it is ya know...
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