Zepto8

Trying to decide whether I should continue switching between POV's. Or if I should just stick to Michael's POV and no POV. I have fully confused myself

146128c

I'm ready for total drama action if it's now available

Zepto8

@146128c No need to apologise, i'm happy you're enjoying the story :)
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146128c

@Zepto8 Okay I'm sorry
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Zepto8

@146128c a lot going on in my life right now, which makes things take longer. But i'm doing my best!
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Zepto8

Soo excited for season two of "alternate ben 10". Have so many origional plans and ideas that i`m super excited to write:)

twisted_cacti44

@Zepto8 the words are fine but maybe a little more detail. Overall it's good man.
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twisted_cacti44

@Zepto8 I'd say it's pretty good me man. I noticed you joined a couple months ago but I gotta say, you're doing great. Better than I was when I first started.
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Zepto8

@maple_syrup953 Appreciate it
            How are you finding the lenghts of the stories btw? Right now they tend to be 2000-3000 words. Should they be longer? Should I go more into detail?
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