Zey740

Why are you yelling at me!!! LOL I reviewed cuz Im awesome

Zey740

I think it sound pretty good and is at least worth a shot I mean what the worst that going to happen someone doesnt like it and someone thinks it great? and if it turn out bad you get help to find out what you weak points are so you can take a better stab at it next time.

Rochelle1897

@Zey740 
          a girl named rose married a guy named luke
          
          in lukes family to prove the strenght of  ones mate the parents have to see how much they can take emotionaly
          so basically they insult rose to see if she breaks and snaps and i consumed by rage.
          
          in my mind it sucks 
          in my friends mind she said  i should stick to poems