Review for 'Mr. Thomas'.
Oh My God!! That was so great. Your medical jargon was amazing. How did you know all of that? This story I ca already tell is going to great. I don;t know if you are planning to continue or not, but if you are I am sure it will be amazing. The story right now is great as is, it could be considered a short story. But I am sure a lot of people, including me, want to know what will happen to the husband. Continue to write, you are very good at it and you are very detailed also. The story line is great, the writing is great, the jargon is great, the describing is great, it was just great. I am a fan!
