I've just finished reading your Nocte Ying stories on fictionpress, I really loved them, and so I started looking at your alternate sites trying to find some more of it. Or at least an indication of when to expect a new chapter. As this seemed to be indicated as your main one, I checked it out and was pleasantly surprised to find it had been edited. I'm reading it now, and am liking the new writing on the first chapter at least.
I'll comment again on finishing this version, but I believe I'll like it, though I may be a little sad if it's not the same as the original version with fewer typos and and a grammar upgrade :)