Zhenlong552

Announcements to my followers: Hi so my account was dormant for the past few monthes and i found few moments where i can actually sit down and write but now I'm back, and I'll restart writing :)

KingJamin

Please Check out my story and give me some feedback?

KingJamin

@Zhenlong552 Thankyou so much!! I really appreciate it and I will work on that!!
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Zhenlong552

@KingJamin Hey, so I red your story and I gotta say that it's really good! However I did find some places where you can improve on, for example in the first chapter you said "batman" too many times, maybe try replacing the word "batman" with other nouns like, the "dark knight", or simply just a "he" to avoid repetition. Otherwise, good story!
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