Zhenlong552

Announcements to my followers: Hi so my account was dormant for the past few monthes and i found few moments where i can actually sit down and write but now I'm back, and I'll restart writing :)

Zhenlong552

Hey everyone! I finished the perfect crime book but didn't publish it because i find it not good enough... I am now working on a new book and will publish the first 5 chapters by April 5th. Please be patient and please, stay home, stay safe, save lives.

KingJamin

Please Check out my story and give me some feedback?

Zhenlong552

@KingJamin Happy to help :)
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KingJamin

@Zhenlong552 Thankyou so much!! I really appreciate it and I will work on that!!
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Zhenlong552

@KingJamin Hey, so I red your story and I gotta say that it's really good! However I did find some places where you can improve on, for example in the first chapter you said "batman" too many times, maybe try replacing the word "batman" with other nouns like, the "dark knight", or simply just a "he" to avoid repetition. Otherwise, good story!
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