Yoongles

Hey lovely!
          Keep up the great work with your book! I think you've put a lot of thought into creating characters and putting backstories that will all come together like an elaborate puzzle, so awesome job on that. My main advice would try and take the time to add more descriptions on the settings and the action going around. There's some great action scenes you're describing, but to really immerse the readers and make them feel the tension, I encourage you to not be afraid to describe the settings and actions to increase the tension the reader may feel.
          Once again, keep up the great work!

Hi!! I like all your stories it's sad that you are underrated author. It's just I wanna request to change your book covers to make it be recognize from the other readers. I'm not a hater ok? I actually liked all of your books. I'm honest chingu.
          
          Love you~ 
          
          -Clark.

Hi chingu!!!