Deep4141

Hey Zina, how’s it going?
          
          My story "Die Another Death: The Underworld relocated.........right into my town !!!" is an entry for the Watty awards. I would very much like it if u could read it and comment on it. Feel free to criticize, point out typos and so on. Your feedback is important to me. 
          
          Thanks in advance !!!   ;-D  ;-)