Hi. Okay. Hello. I, uhm, writing chapter two of my story was really difficult, and I am WELL aware that it needs a lot of editing and I hurried the last part of it?? I also hurried the last part of chapter one?? I'm gonna go and edit them, but in all honesty, I'm just glad I got down a base? I probably shouldn't have published it but I know me, and if I didn't publish it, I'd never finish it??