chrishaighUK

Thanks for your comments on Older Man Rich Girl. How do you think I could improve the story?

chrishaighUK

@ZitaSchaedel Comments are useful, thanks. I am paying attention to your 3 points.
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ZitaSchaedel

@chrishaighUK at the moment it is all too obvious. I am missing a twist of unexpected development. 
            I don't feel the passion they have for each other.
            I don't like the title... he is not old, he is older!
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ElleMThomas

thank you for reading and voting on One Night Or Forever. I hope you'll continue to enjoy it :)

ElleMThomas

Thank you for the reads and votes on Days of Discovery which together with its sequel, Events of Endeavour tell a darkly intense and erotic story which is a little different to my usual mature romances :)
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ElleMThomas

thank you for adding Diary of a Desperate Wife and Mother to your reading list too :)
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ElleMThomas

hi there, long time no see/hear. I hope you are well and wanted to say thank you for reading and voting on One Night Or Forever :)
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