@Zlatex667
My new book, take a look at it if you can.
I just published " 2" of my story "The Royal Bodyguard ". https://www.wattpad.com/1448415344?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Reincarnationgirl
Hello, i saw you said you wanted some pointers for your new book. I'm no professional or expert and sometimes i wonder how and why people read my books but from what I know, you have to give your characters a back story to make it good especially your main leads. So for your new book, you've got to explore why your fl likes your ml. Is he hot, smart or did he save her from bullies etc. But to make it spicier, it would be better if the ml liked the FL but didn't know it yet or he knows it bit doesn't know how to express it very well.
That's all i can say to motivate a new fellow writer but as for me, i write for for fun and don't stress myself if i get negative comments as I am always learning. Thank you
@NunenaClarke Ok thank you for your suggestion and advice, I'll try definitely try to put them all in to practice. Ahh and as for your book, I can't wait to start reading it. I've been waiting for you to update it, thank you
@NunenaClarke The way you write can be a bit amateurish. I would suggest reading this book'Storm and Silence' on Wattpad. It helped when I was writing and follow how expressions and actions are portrayed. Oh and also the third arc of my book is up, it's called Batter My Heart Mr Xi
@NunenaClarke wow ok thank you for the advice that was really helpful, I'll try to insert those into the book. Apart from that it's just that I don't know how to share my book on Wattpad, is it that I should just write or is there a different way? But anyway i have to say that ur book was really nice to read, and I'm still waiting for the third arc of Ties and Fate
My first book yay, try it out.☺️☺️
https://www.wattpad.com/story/367676924
Thanks for the follow fam ❤️