creativereader536

Thanks for adding my story to your reading list. Xx

ZoeTomlinson000

@creativereader536  Thanks! (: I'll work on that for sure
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creativereader536

I started reading it and it looks really good so far but one thing I would recommend is adding in more paragraphs as it’ll just make it slightly more easier to read. Other than that I really like it so far x
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creativereader536

Of course. I’ll check it out when I get a free moment x
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