Hello there, before you completely stop reading ; please hear me out? (:
Although I'm just another author here on Wattpad, I would really appreciate it if you could check out some of my stories. Any compliment is welcome, but I'm really looking for criticism; even if harsh. I want to know the basic ways that I can improve as an author, a writer, and just overall as a person. If you're interested in helping me out, I've included two summaries below from a few of my stories. If you don't have the time or the care I'm sorry I've wasted your time but I wish you the best in your own writing and/or/ reading. Take care! (:
Summaries ;
"Past the moonlight."
"Bliss's older sister, Amelia, has always been the center of attention - the center of the universe. Bliss has always been following her, mimicking her every spoken move. So when Amelia takes her life unexpectedly, Bliss can't seem to know who she is. Worse of all, she feels as if she could have prevented her sisters death. Bad boy, Logan disagree's; he wants her to forgive herself. But Bliss can't forgive easily, not until she let's Amelia go. And she doesn't want to, not quite. Not until something changes hastily again, and Bliss has to make a decision that will change everything."
"Your Pants Look Better On My Floor ;)"
A story about a troubled teen, named Tomorrow. After loosing her father, she and her mother don't get along too well. Living in a shadow for so long, Tomorrow realized how unhappy she is. So after getting arrested and having to move into a foster family's home, she feels as if this her last chance to prove to be someone. And that cute boy in the next room? Well, that's just part of the adventure.
