ScarlettPriestess
Hey. If you're interested in Brothers Conflict stories then I am writing one right now. So do check out my story and tell me how it is! Bye.
Zola-Quinn
sarazaidane
Hey my name is Sara and I just started writing my first book in here and I would really like if you can read it and give me feedback thank you
Zola-Quinn
@sarazaidane I just read some of it and I really like it. The only thing is there are a lot of run on sentences where you could add a comma or start a new sentence and there are places where there's just the wrong word which messes up the sentence. But besides that the book is really good.
Zola-Quinn
Heureux presque 4 Juillet!!!
Zola-Quinn
Beer bottle: you break me, you get one year of bad luck!
Mirror: 1 year!! Ha! You break me you get eight years of bad luck!
Condom: Hahahahahahaha......*walks off laughing*