ZolaSinn

Just updated story description and prologue!

GabriellaCurls

Hi there.
          
          Thanks for your comment on my comment, if that makes any sense. ;  ) I do think he has a great story, but more details would make it super. If you're into sci-fi, I would recommend this book.
          https://my.w.tt/RcBqKQlIF1
          
          Have a great day.
          
          Xoxo Gabriella

ZolaSinn

@ GabriellaCurls the book is here but if you don't want to read it or whatever it's completely fine :) https://my.w.tt/8vfFEGBwx1
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ZolaSinn

@ GabriellaCurls  hi, yea I think it is great story but (as in all of our work) there can be improvement
            Sure I will check it out thanks
            And last thing I rly like your opinions would you mind reading a piece of my story? It's called The First Adventure I could use some criticism!
            The next part will come out tomorrow
            Have a nice day
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