Your stories are really good. I didn't know you had a knack for a good story. Just one thing to help ya get better.
The plot jumps around a little bit. It made it kind of confusing and it was a bit hard to follow.
If you could correct that, they would be incredible. I can't wait to read the next chapter. ;)
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