Zon157

Chapters 5 & 6 are up, as well as changes to the first 4 chapters. Thank you for reading and enjoy.
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/58323772

ForgedOfStardust

Your stories are really good. I didn't know you had a knack for a good story. Just one thing to help ya get better.
          The plot jumps around a little bit. It made it kind of confusing and it was a bit hard to follow.
          If you could correct that, they would be incredible. I can't wait to read the next chapter. ;)