Noorulhudaprincess
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Noorulhudaprincess
I wrote the third chapter by keeping your suggestions in mind. Do give me your honest opinion . I ll appreciate that
Zoogor
@Noorulhudaprincess I think yes it was a little formal and also you described things a bit more than usual. That's just I felt reading. Hopefully it helps you improve :-)
