Noorulhudaprincess

Hey, can you check out my new book? I d love that

Noorulhudaprincess

I wrote the third chapter by keeping your suggestions in mind. Do give me your honest opinion . I ll appreciate that
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Noorulhudaprincess

@Zoogor yeah thanks for your suggestions :)
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Zoogor

@Noorulhudaprincess I think yes it was a little formal and also you described things a bit more than usual. That's just I felt reading. Hopefully it helps you improve :-)
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Noorulhudalijaved

Thanks for voting on my book.
          I'll check it out. :)

Zoogor

Read*
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Zoogor

@Noorulhudalijaved I enjoyed it. I'll need the rest later
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