@Zoragana_Tomioka2
I forgot to mention this earlier, but the forth and fifth chapters of Whimsical Purgatory are now available here and I will likely publish the sixth and seventh ones next week. Anyways, any and all criticism, or even general feedback is welcome.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/376506143
I forgot to announce this earlier, but I have published the first three chapters of Whimsical Purgatory. Frankly, I am quite excited to write this story and I sincerely hope you all give it a chance, even though I know that if anyone does, then it will likely only be one person. Nonetheless, I would appreciate any and all criticism.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/376506143
@K-A-Y-V-A I completely understand and please, take your time. We all have our own lives and if you can't read much of it, then that is perfectly fine, especially since the first three chapters add up to about sixteen thousand words, which makes the chapters much longer on average than those of Child of the Crimson. Although, if you have any criticism, or even any other types of comments, then I would be interested in hearing them.
I’d be happy to read through it and give feedback if I’m able—I say that as I think your writing is fantastic as it is! I probably won’t be able to until Sunday though, as I’m really busy this week.