Miksoko

@alwyatt1 Lol

@alwyatt1 I read all you had posted. The funny thing is star wars never crossed my mind. I got some stephen king vibe and some piers Anthony vibe. Looking back, I can totally tell the difference between your edited and unedited chapters. It's great that you take the time to do that. I find it near impossible :P I have multiple drafts of everything because I don't stick to just one copy. Editing Is a great skill to have

@alwyatt1  yes, yes, sorry. Thank you for reminding me. I read it. First, I must say that it is a stunning idea. It is truly amazing. Is there anything that influenced it? Books, movies, dreams, etc.? Second, if I may be so blunt, what age range are you? Your writing has a distinct age feel about it, but I'd like to hear from you. Unfortunately, this is because of the recurring spelling errors, and the confused voice. Is this a first draft? It seems as though this is a freewrite to get the ideas out of your head. I'm sorry if I seem blunt. I guess I kinda am :/ 

@alwyatt1 Will do. Or try. It was my nano, but my files corrupted and I lost a lot