The 23rd chapter is out and I was finally able to include the mask concept in here.
Now its not particularly a driving factor for the story but I just had to have it.
Thing is, that when I first imagined the story, I had the characters as masks and not faces, (yeah, seems a whole lot of weird) but the way it turned out, I am happy.
Including this means that Yeah, I have not changed the story beyond recognition and not forgetting the story has been my goal through and through.
(Its getting long again)
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