Good afternoon! I went over your story and I would like to say that you wrote an interesting synopsis. The plot was timely and relatable especially the setting and the characters are Senior High School students.Their bond, series of arguments or "bardagulan" sounds cute. In addition, the characters' visuals are giving me a kdrama vibe or webtoon. I also like the fact that, you wrote some parts of your story in English because you're better at it.
Lastly, I've noticed that there's a huge improvement with your format based on your recent story updates and I encourage you to continue writing because to be honest, you have a great potential when it comes to it.