cupcake11865
Hey hannah your book so far is great but I know a thing or two about books and I just want to give you some advice. If your were to write another book you might want to not rush into the book so much like don't right away start saying stuff about the injuriea or what happens to them. Just say stuff like what they were felling before it happens like " I smelled the strong arauma of smoke as the fire ate away at the house. Every second I lost a glimpse of escape and the fire caved in." but that's just an example
