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https://www.wattpad.com/story/397802514-breakpoint
          	
          	On the tennis court, they call Tristan Amaros 'La Bête', The Beast. His power is a terrifying weapon, feared across the professional tour. But off the court, the devastating scars that cover his body from a childhood fire hide a deeper, more painful wound.
          	
          	Years ago, he was the boy who ran back into the flames to rescue two small children, they were the only family he had left. His reward for this sacrifice was to be cast aside. A powerful and influential tennis dynasty deemed him "too ugly" for their legacy but saw perfection in the lives he saved. They took the children to groom them for stardom, leaving Tristan with his scars and the memory of what was taken from him, but at least he was not alone.
          	
          	Now, Tristan is a rising force in the tennis world, a quiet and intense player whose explosive game is setting him on a collision course with the very prodigies at the heart of his trauma, and in the path and radar of the best of the best. Backed by a new family, a colorful cast of supremely talented players, he fights not just for championships, but for the boy who believed his sacrifice wasn't enough.
          	
          	Breakpoint is an emotional sports drama about the cost of sacrifice, the fight to build a new family, and the relentless drive of a man who has the top as his target.
          	
          	A character-driven tennis drama with rivalries, rankings, and Roland-Garros on the horizon! Enjoy the ride!

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https://www.wattpad.com/story/397802514-breakpoint
          
          On the tennis court, they call Tristan Amaros 'La Bête', The Beast. His power is a terrifying weapon, feared across the professional tour. But off the court, the devastating scars that cover his body from a childhood fire hide a deeper, more painful wound.
          
          Years ago, he was the boy who ran back into the flames to rescue two small children, they were the only family he had left. His reward for this sacrifice was to be cast aside. A powerful and influential tennis dynasty deemed him "too ugly" for their legacy but saw perfection in the lives he saved. They took the children to groom them for stardom, leaving Tristan with his scars and the memory of what was taken from him, but at least he was not alone.
          
          Now, Tristan is a rising force in the tennis world, a quiet and intense player whose explosive game is setting him on a collision course with the very prodigies at the heart of his trauma, and in the path and radar of the best of the best. Backed by a new family, a colorful cast of supremely talented players, he fights not just for championships, but for the boy who believed his sacrifice wasn't enough.
          
          Breakpoint is an emotional sports drama about the cost of sacrifice, the fight to build a new family, and the relentless drive of a man who has the top as his target.
          
          A character-driven tennis drama with rivalries, rankings, and Roland-Garros on the horizon! Enjoy the ride!

noirepiv

Você morreria... para viver uma nova vida no Inferno?
          
          HellSweet é um mergulho insano em um Inferno dividido, onde criaturas bizarras, alianças traiçoeiras e demônios carismáticos travam batalhas pelo poder, e pela própria sanidade.
          Acompanhe Balentor e Sally em aventuras sombrias com pitadas de humor ácido e mistérios diabólicos.
          
          Se você gosta do estilo ousado, prepare-se para conhecer o inferno como você nunca viu.
          O trono está vazio. A guerra começou. E Parafernália quer tudo.
          
          HellSweet — onde cada capítulo é um convite à perdição.
          
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/346194196?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=noirepiv

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@ SpacePiracy  fala jovem, beleza? Então, uma coisa que eu acredito, e não é só pra mechas, vale pra Sci-fi no geral, é que ele tem que ser visto como o plano de fundo da história e não necessariamente o foco. Aí já é opinião minha, mas sou muito mais fã de história de mechas que focam no lado humano também. Obviamente, a gente gosta da porradaria dos robôs gigantes, mas é legal quando tem um equilíbrio. Você é fã de mecha também, então sabe que tem diversos gêneros diferentes dentro dele. Escolhe o que você se sentir mais confortável, e manda bala. 

_GDL__

Olá! Publiquei uma inciclopedia para os termos, organizações e alguns dos personagens principais de Para Bellum. Essa "Enciclopedia" Será sempre atualizada com novas informações. Recomendo a leitura do prológo antes da leitura da Enciclopedia, então deixei eles nessa sequencia. Opiniões são sempre bem vindas!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1499910267-para-bellum-enciclop%C3%A9dia-aegis

SpacePiracy

@ GDL_zzz  blz, vlw pelas dicas ^^
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SpacePiracy

@ SpacePiracy  @ GDL_zzz  aopa, bão? Vi q sua obra ja ta completinha, e queria pedir algumas dicas e até mesmo sla, uma opinião sincera sobre como é escrever mecha. Eu tô nesse ramo ha uns 2 anos, mas ainda n tenho certeza das coisas, ent sua ajuda seria mais q bem vinda
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