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(I posted this as a comment on the epilogue of the SB fanfic, but didn't know if you'd be notified of the chapter comment. I wanted to be sure you heard praise for your work!) 
          
          This was my first ever fanfic read, and I'm glad it was this. It's not often that a piece of fiction leaves me with heartache when it's over, but this one did. I knew as I was approaching the last few chapters that I was going to miss the world you created. It's how you know love was put into the story. 
          
          I love the way the characters were brought to life, and how you gave them personalities that were unique but mixed well. You perfectly captured the comradery of a crew, the love of a mother for her child, and the hope of a brighter future. The realistic dilemma of multiple languages, species quirks, and dietary needs amongst the crew added depth and detail. The many nods to TWRP albums and song lyrics brought a smile to my face. The portrayal of darkness and the void with its voice was a great analogy towards mental illness and the spiral of despair that an individual must break through.
          
          Nexeliam did an awesome job with their art and produced material that could easily be used as official pre-animation concepts. I was blown away by how much detail went into some of their work. 
          
          Sorry for my long comment, but hard work and love deserves praise. You did an awesome job, and I would love to one day see a SB anime with a similar storyline for the first season. I'm not sure if you'll ever see this, but thank you for taking the time to write. May your stars shine bright and your future ever brighter :) God bless!